25. Bonus: Volume 11 (L.B. Armageddon) discussion topics

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Left Behind Volume 11 (Armageddon, c2003) Discussion topics

(Added April 2007)

Discussion topic: In 2 Chronicles 36:22 and Ezra 1:1 we read that “The LORD stirred up the spirit of Cyrus” to do a good thing. Cyrus proclaims that the LORD (2 Chronicles 36:23, Ezra 1:2-4) “has appointed me” to rebuild the Jewish Temple. Cyrus also returns the sacred objects which Nebuchadnezzar had seized from the Temple (Ezra 1:7-11 and 6:5). All the king (Cyrus, Darius, or both) asks in return is that those he helps will offer sacrifices pleasing to God and will pray for the well-being of the king and his sons (Ezra 6:10). Many subjects of Cyrus (translated as “the neighbors”) give freewill offerings and gifts to the departing Jews, to finance their efforts (Ezra 1:6).

For reasons of local politics, the construction of the Temple is interrupted for the reign of a few kings. It is resumed when Darius finds the scroll of Cyrus’ edict. Darius decrees that all costs shall be paid from the royal treasury (Ezra 6:4, 8-9). He threatens human and divine judgment upon anyone who tries to change his decree and/or destroy this Temple (Ezra 6:11-12). These edicts brought great blessing to the Jewish people, who celebrated the Passover as their first feast in the new Temple. Yet Cyrus, Darius, and the “neighbors” who donated money were pagans, worshipping foreign gods.

In the novel, Otto calls Krystall a “gem” (page 222). Rayford calls her a “godsend” (page 230). Buck snorts that this is an “interesting thing to say about someone bearing the mark of the beast.” Even as Buck and Zeke disparage her, Krystall has been murdered for helping them (pages 235-6). Krystall never knew Albie, but she and Otto finished his work. Krystall failed to rescue Chloe, but (unlike Razor) she died trying. Do you believe that God uses only Christians to do God’s work in the world? Why or why not?

Related: Rayford claimed on page 40 that Krystall has no “free will.” Yet Krystall seems an ambiguous character. She is proud of her Uncle Gregory for refusing to join the side she chose. She helps the Tribulation Force simply because “being in trouble is no worse than being in [Carpathia’s] good graces” (page 94). If Krystall has no free will, where did her good deeds come from? How and why did she do them? Did she make a choice to help? Did God make her help the Tribulation Force, even though she thinks her actions are her idea? If Krystall died trying to save the life of a tribulation saint (which she did), would that make her a tribulation martyr? What if she was unmarked? (Note: amillennialists—who believe that the “seal” of God and the “mark” of the beast are internal as per Jer. 31:33—and rapturists—who believe the signs are external—may have different answers.)

Discussion topic: When Jesus traveled, he had compassion upon the crowds, because they were as sheep without a shepherd (Matt. 9:35-38). His response was to heal, teach, comfort, and to call for more workers. Jesus did this, knowing that all would desert him in his Passion. Probably some of them never came back. He acted upon His compassion anyway.

When the novel’s protagonists travel, they struggle with compassion. Rayford feels it in New Babylon. He even tries to act upon it by seeking food and shelter for the doomed woman on the tarmac. Still, the fact that he feels compassion torments him; he cannot reconcile it with his beliefs. Otto Weser (see Deut. 27.18) feels no compassion for the suffering crowds, until he gets to know one inhabitant personally. Then, when Krystall dies, he is horrified. Chloe and Tsion express frustration for their isolation from unmarked people, not compassion, as such; it is their personal frustration, not compassion, that ultimately leads to their deaths. Meanwhile, Buck, like most of the characters, takes no especial interest in the fate of outsiders until the day of battle. Did you find yourself feeling compassion for Krystall, for the woman on the tarmac, for the prisoners, for the crowds? Do we ever “give up” on situations or people out of a feeling that the task is too large, too confusing, too late, or too hopeless? Is that our call to make?

Discussion topic: Zeke comments that “of course” the protagonists will not try to stop prophesied events, “but it’ll be good to know exactly what’s happening” (page 203). Mordecai and Queen Esther did not consider it a good thing or a sufficient thing to merely “know” what would happen (Esther 4:12-16). Neither did Jesus (Matt. 16:21-28; 19:17-19; 26:54; John 13:18-38 and many verses). Neither did John the Baptist, or Paul, or the apostles.

In the novel, Zeke’s attitude, Chang’s ability to interfere with televised broadcasts (and disinclination to do so unless personally provoked), or Buck and Tsion and Chaim’s fascination with matching current events with specific Biblical verses, seem to be more about satisfying curiosity than about looking to the Bible for a holy call to repentance and/or an aid in righteous living. Do you agree with Mordecai’s caution to Esther that if humans say no to the chance to participate in God’s work, then that work will devolve to people more receptive to God’s leading? If humans can be summoned to help make a prophecy come true (cf. 2 Chron. 36:22; Luke 1:26-38), is the inverse also true? That is, do you agree with Zeke’s belief that humans could prevent a prophecy from coming true? Why or why not?

Related: What do you think about Otto’s belief that he should make a special effort to fulfill a specific prophecy? Did he do right by the six people who lost their lives following him? Otto does become a help and comfort to Krystall. Should he simply have gone to New Babylon alone?

Discussion topic: Chang Wong expresses a sensitive conscience. Naomi insists that he need feel no shame that he will stay home with his computers as other believers (including his “pope,” Tsion) face death in battle. Naomi wants Chang to live so that they can marry. “Let’s not risk that for the sake of your conscience” (page 321).

The Jewish elders insist that Chang need feel no shame that he bears the mark of the beast (pages 137-8). Tsion says he will pray that the mark of the beast will be removed from Chang’s forehead—but Tsion is okay with it if God’s answer is No. Tsion implies that if God’s answer is No, Chang should be okay with it too. (Since the mark equals an eternal doom, Chang understandably bursts into tears [page 138].)

Does Chang suffer from Scrupulosity and the other characters are correct, or is Chang’s conscience responding appropriately and the other characters have become insensitive of conscience? Are all characters correct? Are all characters wrong? Other?

Discussion topic: Chloe is visited by Caleb the angel. What do we know about angels? Have you had an encounter with one? (Bonus: consider a faith-based collection such as Where Angels Walk by Joan Wester Anderson for your next book club meeting.)

Discussion topic: Chloe tells a fellow prisoner, “If you know who I am, you know what I stand for.” The statement presupposes that a new character (or a new reader) would actually know who Chloe is, and what she stands for. It also presupposes that, if her reputation precedes her, then her reputation must be good. Newcomers would readily recognize who and what she stands against. Is that enough? In your own words, who is Chloe Steele Williams, and what does she stand for? (If possible, include in your study group both long-time readers and readers for whom Volume 11 is their introduction to the character and the series.)

Discussion topic: Tsion and Chloe quote many verses during their last days and their death scenes. Some readers find the quotes touching, rousing, and appropriate. Other readers find them excessive or mechanical, more like copying the Bible than living it. Did you find their words apt, or would you have liked the characters to more often speak in their own voices?

Discussion topic: Unlike Rayford’s relationship with his son Raymie, Rayford enjoys spending time with his grandson Kenny Bruce (pages 337, 345-6). Rayford realizes that, in ordinary times, his grandson would have started school within the year. Rayford wonders what the future holds. His questions are influenced by his belief that mortals and immortals (or, “naturals” and “glorifieds,” as they are called in Volume 16-called-13) will live together on earth for 1,000 years. Will Rayford and Kenny age, while Irene, Chloe, Raymie, and Amanda do not age? What will happen when the mortal Rayford is reunited with his two immortal wives? Without skipping ahead to Volume 12 or to Volume 16-called-13 (a.k.a. Kingdom Come), answer Rayford’s questions.

Discussion topic: Chloe admits a certain smugness” toward nonbelievers. “She was too polite to gloat, but she couldn’t deny some private satisfaction in knowing that one day she would be proved right” (page 232). Notice how Chloe was not even thinking about God being “proved right” (as if it were somehow necessary), but herself. Chloe later says that this attitude reflected an immature stage of her faith. Do you think this is a normal stage in the life of new believers, or is it just Chloe and her friends? Is it ever appropriate for a Christian to gloat? How can we overcome this response?

Discussion topic: In previous volumes, technology, personnel, and other random factors tended to operate in the believers’ favor. (Kirk: “You mean we’ve been lucky.” Spock: “I believe I said that, Captain.)

In volume 11, luck, or alternately divine favor, appears to be receding, at least for some characters. Unmarked individuals such as Mac McCullum (page 233), the team of “Woo and Associates” (page 270), and Double-M (page 98) simply are not examined for the mark, even though the bounty for unmarked individuals is 20,000 Nicks. (If a character left 20,000 dollars on the floor in the middle of a bus terminal, people would pick it up. Would not a character wearing a hat and gloves in the novel’s aforementioned hot weather look like walking money?) It has been proposed that the reason the men are not examined is that it is convenient to the plot that these characters live. Thus it is internally consistent that, when Chloe is arrested for refusing to show her unmarked skin, the reader begins to think that she is being written out of the story.

The other luxury that begins to fail the team is that all their alibis, all their moles, and all their impressive technology cannot tell them where to find the GC’s most notorious prisoner (Chloe). The characters do not express amazement and gratitude that they have lasted this long, only frustration that their charmed existence could not last one year longer. (Exercise: list at least ten to fifteen blessings the characters enjoy that are rare in end-of-the-world stories. We will help the reader get started with a list of six: health/medical care, adequate food/water, education, shelter and alternate shelter, reliable transportation, electricity, etc.)

Do we think about how much we like God when times are good, only to doubt when things turn toward the worse? Are we more likely to invite God to share our lives when our blessings are abundant, or are we more likely to turn to God primarily when times are troubled and we need something? How can we be more steady with God in changing circumstances, places, and times?

Discussion topic: The villains slander Chloe’s male relatives by calling them dissolute, arrogant murderers who could not hold a steady job. The villains slander Chloe’s identity by attacking her employment (i.e. she has a job, in addition to the job of homemaker), and by attacking her sexuality and her status as godly wife and mother.

The GC attacks Chloe as a businesswoman and as a homemaker. Instead of Woman as she who brings food from afar, she who opens her hand to the needy (cf. Proverbs 31:14, 20), Chloe is accused of stealing food to extract cruel profit from the starving. (The novel exalts her work by suggesting that it takes four people to do her job. Lionel Whalum inherits the Co-op, with Ming assisting. The unseen characters Leah Rose and Hannah Palemoon also join the staff [page 267]. The villains imply that she steals enough that it would take four people to replace her; that is how she “amassed a fortune.”)

The GC attacks Chloe as a mate and parent. Instead of Woman as giver of life, Chloe is accused of taking the lives of her children. Specifically, she is accused of two abortions, after a live birth, a girl, allegedly dies under suspicious circumstances. (There are two notable inferences. One, Chloe could be portrayed as a promiscuous woman, an unfaithful wife. Two, Chloe could be accused of “gender selection.” That is, since Chloe is not a Shaker, she needs to bear a boy-child before she can call her child “the reincarnation of Jesus.” Therefore, it is implied, Chloe methodically killed her children until she had a boy.)

Additionally, in the series, the term “abortionist” is one of the worst words any character can call any other character. It is so bad that, when new mom Chloe sinks into depression and contemplates taking her life and 14-month-old Kenny’s life to avoid capture (Volume 7, pages 56-60), Tsion talks her out of it by saying that Chloe would be “no better than an abortionist.” (As we see in Volume 11, Chloe certainly has reversed her position!)

Given that Rayford is the one with a decade-long “past” as an unfaithful husband—for all we know, the “dumped” (her word) Hattie Durham may have told the GC all about it—why is Chloe the one being portrayed as promiscuous? Given that Chloe dies to protect her child, why is Chloe the one being portrayed as a bad parent? Why do you think the novel includes this exchange?

Discussion topic: Reread Chloe and Albie’s memorial service. Some readers find Tsion’s remarks too generic. (Chloe’s label of Good Student, and Albie’s label as Hard Worker, could as easily summarize a teacher’s favorite second-graders.) Other readers find the service tastefully reserved, noting that it would be inappropriate to be too intimate with a million people watching. Write or tell your own memorial service for the characters; alternately, let a family member (Rayford, Buck, Kenny) add remarks to the service.

Discussion topic: Chloe Steele Williams eats supper at 7 P.M. and is captured at about 4 A.M. She is confined for approximately 55 hours. (In forward chronology, Chloe is captured at about 4 A.M. of Day 1 and dies approximately 11 A.M. of Day 3.)

Chloe goes 64 hours between supper with her earthly family and the feast of the Lamb with her heavenly family, whilst lightly snacking along the way. (In forward chronology, Chloe eats supper at home at 7 P.M. She eats an energy bar two midnights later. She drinks half a chocolate milkshake at 4 A.M., or four hours later. She eats lunch with Jock at noon, or eight hours later. She dies 23 hours after lunch with Jock. In reverse chronology, if Chloe dies at 11 A.M., it has been 23 hours since she ate lunch with Jock, 31 hours since the chocolate milkshake, 35 hours since the energy bar, and 64 hours since Chloe ate supper at home.) The food situation fascinates critics, some of whom have been less than kind. Your host would suggest that both Chloe’s situation, and the critics’ response to it, may be influenced by the school of “he jests at scars who never felt a wound.”

It once was the custom of able-bodied Christians to fast between Good Friday and Easter Sunday. Some years past, your host decided to do this. Between bedtime on Holy Thursday to breakfast at church on Easter Sunday, your host was aiming for 58 ½ hours. Unfortunately, your host had certain experiences that made it seem prudent to take a bowl of chicken noodle soup at the 54 ½ hour mark, and it was cold by the time your host forced down the last of it. No doubt this had something to do with your host indulging in a lot of unnecessarily vainglorious exercise during that time. (You know how sometimes humans do things just to prove that they can?) Verily, verily, those who do it the wrong way for the wrong reasons have their reward. But it may give your host an insight into Chloe’s situation that those who have never tried it might not have. And perhaps it is appropriate that when your host reviewed this novel (Volume 11), it was again the season of Lent. (Edit: in 2016, it’s still almost Lent.)

Experience would suggest that Chloe should not feel “light-headed” from hunger only 14 hours from her previous meal (supper at 7 P.M.; page 85), or “weak” from hunger only 23 hours from her previous meal (lunch with Jock; page 255), unless she has a pre-existing health condition, or, alternately, has been indulging in the aforementioned unnecessary strenuous exercise. If the Gentle Browser has ever been punished for a childhood mischief by being sent to bed without any supper, you have already surpassed Chloe’s first missed meal in prison. If the Gentle Browser also missed breakfast because you overslept and had to run for the school bus, you have already surpassed Chloe’s second missed meal in prison. If the Gentle Browser missed school lunch because you had no time to pack a lunch and no money to purchase it, you have already surpassed Chloe’s third missed meal in prison. (It isn’t really about beating Chloe.)

Chloe has been consuming just enough calories to keep her ketones intrigued. Chloe does well to be hungry, but she should not be debilitated. She would have passed through headaches and nausea first, before going straight to woozy spells and physical weakness. (It isn’t really about Chloe’s symptoms.)

Chloe has a job feeding millions of people (Volume 5, page 346). Millions of people (Volume 11, page 264). From the nonexistent food shortages in Volume 1—when grocery stores were never looted, and were unaffected by the loss of truckers and trains hauling food—up through the characters literally living underground in bunkers in Volume 11, the believers eat very well. (Readers have suggested that this is the authors’ attempt to incorporate Rev. 6:6 into the storyline. Oil and wine were luxury items, or, alternately, necessities that people could not afford.) Chloe has not clung to life on a dying planet, only to weep with joy at the sight of a farmer’s stocked cellar (cf. Cormac McCarthy’s The Road). Chloe has not strip-mined a grocery store on a dying planet so that her family can select one survivor and give that person the bulk of the family’s food (cf. Susan Beth Pfeffer’s Life As We Knew It). Chloe has not mourned her friend “Megan”—who died of starvation—only to discover that Megan’s hero, “Reverend Marshall,” has always had enough to eat (Pfeffer). Chloe has not been so starving as to heat mud on a stove and tell her belly it is soup (cf. Pearl S. Buck’s The Good Earth). (It isn’t really about whether Chloe is in the right novel.)

Food is one of the great cultural identifiers. What one eats, and with whom one eats, defines who is in the group, and who is outside the group. But the fact that it is easily categorized does not make it tamed. If we cannot even ascertain whether Megan (Life As We Knew It) died of natural causes, misguided hero worship, holy asceticism, or anorexia, then the topic of whether Chloe Steele Williams is fasting or merely dieting is not a fair question. It may not even be a relevant question. (Only a Westerner could call liquid nourishment a “juice fast.” Jesus did not spend forty days and forty nights in the wilderness partaking of energy bars, or even zero-calorie diet colas. To be fair, there are those who would say that what your host did and does, does not qualify as fasting because your host drinks water.)

Chloe has fed her millions and herself, yet this is the character that the villains taunt with food. These same villains have enough to eat, too much in fact (cf. Florence and Jock). The characters in Petra have all the manna they can eat … which they devour in fifteen, ten, or five minutes and hasten back to work (page 136), thus losing the social connections nurtured by sharing meals. (Heavenly manna downgraded to fast-food: discuss.)

In contrast, the unnamed Mrs. Shivte (pages 348-9) is forced to choose between taking the mark to buy food for her family, or preserving her soul but being cursed by her hungry family—a choice that it was Chloe’s good fortune never to make. We see Chloe struggling “to keep her sanity” (page 132) before she has completed her first 24 hours in custody. Mrs. Shivte must endure the methodical harassment of her family, for weeks, or months, or years. And that was before she accepted Jesus and was harassed by her family for that as well. (When your host first posted this story in a public forum, a reader zinged back: “Band name alert: ‘Mama and the Shiftless Shivtes.’”) In all that time, it never occurred to her husband or grown sons to sell their own souls for food. They still wanted to sell Mom’s soul for food. Mom was not “Mom” anymore. She became disposable. If that is how the “good guys” behave, should we be astonished that the villains assume Chloe will respond the same way? Why wouldn’t she sell her soul to Hell for a Big Boy Breakfast Bar®? This novel has not one but two examples of mothers being told that that is what a good woman, a good mommy, would do.

No, the question is not about fasting, or dieting, or dying without food, or dying with food. It is about food as a blessing, and whether we make right use of that blessing. It is about the fact that when the believers meet together, it is not to eat the Lord’s Supper but their own. It is about food being used to tempt the characters into sin. It is about characters coping, or failing to cope, with that temptation. To what extent do the characters make food into an idol? To what extent do they make the denial of food into an idol? To what extent do we make food, and/or the denial of food, into an idol?

Discussion topic: Next, we consider what else the villains were not doing during the time they were not feeding Chloe. The authors do surprisingly little with the noise-pollution and sleep-deprivation angles. Chloe should have deteriorated from sleep deprivation fairly quickly. (Perhaps her four-hour nap in San Diego, her drugged sleep during transport, and her “dozing” in Joliet were more restorative than one would think.)

Chloe has been captured by the lackeys of Nicolae Carpathia, a character who repeatedly claims he wants to finish the job the Nazis started (pages 223, 297). If Chloe had been captured by people who truly grasped what that meant, she would have to worry about whether she would be sorted into the line for the Mengele tour or the line for the non-Mengele tour. Chloe herself testifies about Jews being “wasted, scarred, starved, beaten” (pages 25, 243) and scheduled to die slow and die hard. (Alternately, if she had been captured by a certain Axis power from the east, then Chloe, as a “woman,” might be put to work “comforting” the soldiers, in a place and time where Florence’s joke about “dates” was no joke.)

Chloe is not captured by a competent villain like Double-M, who wastes no time or energy with troublemakers. (Chloe’s smartest foe is probably Florence, the only one who knew how to cultivate her trust.)

Chloe is left unmolested for all but approximately four hours of her 55 hours in custody. (We can suggest one hour for booking, and for arguing with Florence, Nigel, and the custodian. One hour for Jock tempting her with his breakfast, and for loading her into the hearse. One hour in Joliet: about 15 minutes for the truth serum, with the rest of the time spent arguing with Jess, the night guard, and the reporters. Finally, Chloe spends one hour in the sun before it is her turn at the machine.) Chloe acquires bruises—but, except for the time she fell out of bed, all her bruises are reactionary. (It is debatable whether one could call them avoidable.) She is bruised primarily when she resists arrest, booking, transfer, and so forth. Jock backhands her, and that was a cheap shot, but even that was Jock’s reaction to his own mishandling of the transfer. No one hits Chloe to intimidate her, to obtain information from her, or even to pass the time.

Whatever the reason, Chloe, rich, white, and healthy, avoids the worst calamities. (Indeed, Chloe is captured in part because of a lack of calamities. In most end-of-the-world novels, breathable air and safe water are the first essentials to go, because of the recycling action of weather. If the air had not been crisp and sweet [page 43]—if it had been appropriately filthy—Chloe would not have been so tempted to sneak outside and breathe it.) Again, we do not idly dismiss her experiences; we weigh them, to determine their substance. Chloe certainly is not having fun here, but neither are her captors—a significant omission.

Chloe even avoids abuse-by-proxy. The villains threaten to take her son. Had they captured Kenny, they could have hurt him in violent and creative ways, to coerce information from Chloe that she would not otherwise have volunteered. As we know, the villains do not capture him. However, they do not lie to Chloe and claim they captured him, and, as critics note, everyone seems to just forget the whole idea. (In light of these threats, what do you think about Chloe’s comment to Ming Toy that family affairs are nobody’s business? Discuss.)

Finally, Chloe does not die hard, like Agatha with her bowl, or Catherine with her wheel. Chloe dies on a guillotine, a device invented by an eponymous doctor to be as painless as possible. (It should be noted that Rev. 20:4 does not use the word “guillotine.”) Chloe dies like the old aristocrats, whereas people who happen to be of a different race and status routinely are denied even this much.

None of this is to say that Chloe ought to suffer. It is to gently inquire why she was spared the worst of it. What is special about Chloe, that she lives well and dies well, whereas others equally beloved of God live and die hard? If Chloe is under divine protection, we are not told of it. An alternate conclusion is that she is under the authors’ protection, even if the effect is to make her look delicate, sheltered, out of touch. (Our dread for Chloe is influenced in part by the dread voiced by her family, who do not know what is happening to her. They think they can endure her death, but they cannot bear to wonder if she is suffering. See pages 74, 185.) The audience and the writers have come to care for Chloe. She is like their daughter. But the desire to spare her may do a disservice to the real star of the story, which is (or ought to be) God, made flesh in Jesus Christ. It may do the audience a disservice as well, by making promises it cannot keep, promises that may or may not be Biblical.

The Bible repeatedly reminds us that God is no respecter of persons (Acts 10:34-5, Rom. 2:11, Col. 3:25; I Pet. 1:17). To what extent does the novel make status and privilege into an idol? To what extent do we make status and privilege into an idol?

Discussion group project (optional): If there are enough participants in your book club or church study group, re-write, narrate, or speculate on the first half of the novel as it would unfold if the villains had captured one or more Jewish characters. (Examples: Tsion, Chaim, Naomi, Eleazar, Mrs. Shivte.) Chapters may include, but are not limited to: how the character is captured; how the family responds; rescue attempts; when and why rescue attempts might cease; what accusations the villains advertise against the character; how the believers’ Internet statement describes and defends the character; whether the character is missed enough or important enough to get an Internet statement; how the character is treated by the villains; how the character dies; and who speaks at the memorial service and what the service might be like.

Discussion topic: There is one more idol we must challenge before we let the beloved dead rest. That idol is survival. Not “perseverance.” Survival.

In McCarthy’s The Road, a man tells his little son, “I am your father. My job is to protect you. I was appointed by God to do this. I will kill anyone who touches you.” They are “the good guys,” and good guys “carry the fire.” (In Lord of the Rings, the angel Gandalf calls the Holy Spirit “the secret fire.”) The man is torn between his dead wife’s taunt to “curse God and die” (cf. Job 2:9) and his dread of being tempted to kill the child rather than leave him orphaned in this unspeakable place (cf. Chloe Steele Williams in L.B. Volume 7). The man’s response is to make an idol out of survival. He rebukes the child’s impulse to share their food with strangers. In time, the boy—not much older than Kenny Bruce—begs his papa to tell him no more bedtime stories. They make his heart sad because they are not true. The man says that “stories don’t have to be true. They’re just stories.” The little boy shakes his head. “In those old stories, we’re always helping people. We don’t help people.” (Significantly, the only character they help is the only character who receives a name, prompting readers’ speculation as to whether Ely is actually human, and whether he has come to test them.)

In Pfeffer’s Life As We Knew It, the narrator Miranda thinks that her friend died a bad death. Megan was oblivious to her mother’s need for her to live, a need that may outrank Megan’s private preferences. In time, Miranda faces her last days of starvation. She decides to walk “to get the mail” until she dies. She reasons that the cases are not parallel. If she stays, her little brother (the designated survivor) would be tempted to give her his food, in a futile attempt to keep her alive a few more days. This could cost him his life, and none of them would survive. Miranda realizes that there is nothing she can do to save her life. She can only act to save her brother’s life, by removing the temptation. Miranda leave home not to break her brother’s spirit, but to protect it. And her willingness to lay down her life for her loved ones is what ends up saving them all. (Readers’ tastes vary as to the appropriateness of the happy ending.)

In the Twilight Zone episode, “Nothing in the Dark,” an elderly woman thinks she can discern the spirits, one in particular. She barricades herself in her home to shut out Mister Death. One day, Death (played by a young Robert Redford) does get in. He does not disrespect her determination to live. It is that very strength which has kept her alive. Instead, he gently observes that, in her obsession to stay alive, she has forgotten how to truly live. She goes nowhere, she does nothing, she loves no one. She does not even see the sun, and she used to love it so much. Wanda replies that Mister Death does not look more attractive to her merely because he has prettied himself and speaks to her “nicely” and with respect. She does not want to die. Mister Death points her toward her motionless body. She was so preoccupied with him that she had not missed it yet. Death admits that he tricked her by appealing to her compassion. It was the one part of her spirit that was stronger than her desperation. Her willingness to risk her life to save another life becomes a good death, bespeaking a good afterlife. He takes her hand and welcomes her into her beloved sunlight.

In L.M. Montgomery’s The Blue Castle, a depressed spinster, living on the charity of relatives, learns that she has a fatal heart condition. Valancy discovers that she who has been afraid of everything in life, is not afraid of death. She resents death. She perceives how unfair it is that she must die when she has never truly lived. Therefore she decides to live like she is dying … which, for a character in the 1910s, includes such unorthodox activities as bobbing her hair, reading a book on Sunday, asking the love of her life to marry her, and getting her first job. After a few months of wedded bliss, Valancy learns from her doctor that she is the victim of a medical mix-up. Another patient with a similar name had the disease; Valancy’s symptoms being caused by her depression, she can consider herself cured. Crushed, she concludes that the proper thing to do is to abandon her husband and grovel to her mother as befits a destitute “fallen woman.” Her husband is aghast at how hastily his wife returns to her old idols and ways. (Valancy replies that this is an interesting observation from a man who has similarly impoverished his spirit by nurturing his idol of Pride.)

To close this volume in this season of Lent, let us consider the following quote. Kass was speaking of biotech, but it challenges other idols (technology, survival, self) as well.

Could life be serious or meaningful without the limit of mortality? Is not the limit on our time the ground of our taking life seriously and living it passionately? To know and to feel that one goes around only once, and that the line is not out of sight, is for many people the necessary spur to the pursuit of something worthwhile. “Teach us to number our days,” says the Psalmist, “that we may get a heart of wisdom.” To number our days is the condition for making them count. Homer’s immortals — Zeus and Hera, Apollo and Athena — for all their eternal beauty and youthfulness, live shallow and rather frivolous lives, their passions only transiently engaged, in first this and then that. They live as spectators of the mortals, who by comparison have depth, aspiration, genuine feeling, and hence a real center in their lives. Mortality makes life matter.

[Finally,] there is the peculiar human beauty of character, virtue, and moral excellence. To be mortal means that it is possible to give one’s life, not only in one moment, say, on the field of battle, but also in the many other ways in which we are able in action to rise above attachment to survival. Through moral courage, endurance, greatness of soul, generosity, devotion to justice—in acts great and small—we rise above our mere creatureliness, spending the precious coinage of the time of our lives for the sake of the noble and the good and the holy. We free ourselves from fear, from bodily pleasures, or from attachments to wealth—all largely connected with survival—and in doing virtuous deeds overcome the weight of our neediness; yet for this nobility, vulnerability and mortality are the necessary conditions …

Confronted with the growing moral challenges posed by biomedical technology, let us resist the siren song of the conquest of age and death. Let us cleave to our ancient wisdom and lift our voices and properly toast L’Chaim, to life beyond our own, to the life of our grandchildren and their grandchildren.

–Leon R. Kass

All these concerns, and many more, have been directed at the Left Behind series by its critics. From Buck’s refusal to witness to Gerald Fitzhugh in Volume 2, up through the present, critics repeatedly cite the characters’ reluctance to witness to outsiders whom the characters consider to be a poor risk. They feed prospective converts as an incentive and a perk, but they do not feed strangers as a form of witness in itself, as Jesus did. The Bible tells us that the souls underneath the altar of God held to their testimony and loved not their lives even unto death. In contrast, some members of the Tribulation Force love their lives so much that they will kill to protect it. In a purportedly Christian novel and series, these are serious charges.

It has been suggested that Chloe’s journey in Volume 11 is, in fact, the authors’ way of incorporating and responding to this criticism. Some of the first words out of Chloe’s mouth are a protest against the believers’ insular lifestyle. They are not doing enough to meet and help nonbelievers, she says. And when she is captured, the idol of survival is ultimately smashed. She refuses to choose the evil mark to keep her body alive. In previous volumes, it was not uncommon for God to rescue the believers from themselves. Under pressure, a character may grow to exhibit a quality that they did not necessarily need to explore when their lives were charmed: their capacity for courage.

Chloe is captured because she made a mistake. Nevertheless, Chloe dies doing what Jesus did: reaching out to the person who died beside Him. Chloe continues her ministry up to the very end, converting six people. Now, compared to superstars like Tsion—who seems to be able to convert thousands of people with one speech—perhaps leading six people, or one penitent thief, into paradise might not seem like much to the world. But to that one person, it is everything in the world.

And then there is everybody else. Buck comments that, after Tsion’s family was killed, it makes sense to Buck that “I know he’d rather have been carrying an Uzi than a Bible” (page 308). As Buck predicted, Tsion decides to learn the art of war to fight in the final battle for Jerusalem. He declares that if the Lord allows it, then no man can stop it (page 307). Tsion never actually states that the Lord blessed it. He assumes that if the Lord does not stop it, this constitutes approval. The novel presents Tsion’s decision as heroic. We see many individuals like that in the Bible. Not all of them are heroes. Tsion will smash the idol of survival by spraying it with his machine gun, “like a garden hose” (page 314). But has he set up another idol in its place? Is Tsion glorifying God, or himself?

Meanwhile, Krystall and Albie never see their deaths coming. Buck and Albie die of tactical mistakes, like Chloe did, but without the chance to redeem that mistake, as Chloe did.

So, rather than asking it time and again in all of the other volumes, we will ask it in this one, where so many characters die so closely together, and where so many other characters hire a plane and escape the whole business. To what extent have the characters made an idol out of bodily survival? To what extent have the characters made an idol out of dying for the cause? To what extent do we make idols of these things? To what extent have the characters overcome their idols? How about us?

Spoilers will appear in a separate post.

24. Bonus: Volume 11 (L.B. Armageddon) spoilers

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Left Behind Volume 11 (Armageddon, c2003) spoilers

(Added April 2007)

Spoiler: Why are we covering Volume 11 (a.k.a. “Armageddon”) out of order?

Answer: Lots of characters die. Readers often skip ahead to this volume to see who lived. (Also, your host has been unusually busy of late. If we can review only one volume this spring, it might as well be one that readers particularly requested.)

Spoilers

Spoiler: As the novel opens, what are the major characters doing?

Answer: It has been a little over six years since the Tribulation began. Chang Wong is holding his position as a mole in New Babylon (pages xii-xvi). The plague of darkness blinds the unbelievers, but Chang and other believers can see in a dim sepia effect. Rayford Steele, Abdullah Smith, and Naomi Tiberias fly to New Babylon to retrieve Chang (pages 1-3, 5-10).

Naomi’s influence has grown mightily. “She had emerged as a technological prodigy … the teacher who taught teachers” (pages 2-3). Naomi will join Chang to complete a remote-control system that taps into the enemies’ electronics. They have worked together for months, but they have never met.

In New Babylon, Rayford is confronted by the shrieks and sobs of unsaved people who are helpless before the plague of pain and the plague of darkness. “The wailing pierced him, and he slowed, desperate to help. But what could he do?” (page 13). He tries to comfort a marked woman on the tarmac (pages 14-18). She asks if he is an angel. She prayed for one, she prayed to God, she prays and begs. She says she always knew “the truth” but did not accept it. She begs Rayford to feed her. She says, “I’ve been praying that God will save my soul. And when he does, I will be able to see.” Rayford has no words; he and she both just said that it is too late. Rayford looks for food, but the terminal has been looted. He cannot even bring food to comfort her.

“Rayford knew the prophecy—that people would reject God enough times that God would harden their hearts and they wouldn’t be able to choose him even if they wanted to. But knowing it didn’t mean Rayford understood it. And it certainly didn’t mean he had to like it. He couldn’t make it compute with the God he knew, the loving and merciful one who seemed to look for ways to welcome everyone into heaven, not keep them out” (pages 17-18).

Albie and Mac McCullum have been sharing a rental in a “forsaken” Middle Eastern neighborhood where the only questions asked are all pronounced, “Where’s the rent.” They usually are careful. Tonight, Albie feels he must take a risk to complete a mission.

Buck Williams, Chloe Steele Williams, and George Sebastian are hiding in their San Diego underground compound (pages 5-8, 10-12). Specifically, they live beneath an old military base (page 11). They have a vehicle bay (page 30) and a gym room with salvaged and reconditioned exercise equipment (page 42). Their refuge includes four wings of dormitories (page 30), wherein live more than two hundred people (page 26). Little Kenny Bruce Williams, almost four, sleeps in his own room, a small chamber next to the compound’s periscope. Chloe likes having the periscope in their very home. She calls it a protective instinct; Buck teases that it is a control issue (page 25).

At one o’clock A.M. Buck and George are alerted to a surface-side motion detector. Nine GC men are wandering and poking at random objects above their heads. George, an Air Force combat chopper pilot (essentially their weapons-and-tactical officer), concludes that the strangers are bored and pose no threat. Chloe is more suspicious. She protests that they are not doing enough to meet and convert unmarked people (page 11). Instead, they hide in their warren like “prairie dogs” and raise babies who hardly ever see the sun (page 12). Is there no isolated region out of the GC’s control? (Trivia alert: Zeke says there is. He lives in Avery, Wisconsin, and has never seen a GC troublemaker there [page 188].)

Chloe pushes the others to let her stand watch. Buck has stood watch for three nights, and George has been awake for some of that time. In the end Chloe prevails (pages 18-19).

Spoiler: Are there new romances in the novel?

Answer: There are two romances: between Ming Toy and Ree Woo (engaged to be married), and between Ming’s brother Chang Wong and Naomi Tiberias (just met).

Ming Toy wants Tsion Ben Judah to perform the marriage ceremony by videocam. She does not want to impose too much upon such a busy man, so she has designed a ceremony that would last just a few minutes.

Chloe is the only person who has not been trying to talk Ming and Ree out of marrying. Chloe remembers when the same people

… advised against her and Buck having a child during the Tribulation. But certain matters were private issues of the heart. Chloe couldn’t imagine not having married Buck, despite knowing how little time they had. And she couldn’t get her mind around the concept of life without their precious little one. If Ming and Ree wanted a year of marriage before the Glorious Appearing, whose business was it but theirs? It wasn’t as if they were unaware of the hardships. Starting a family at this stage was another thing, of course, but Chloe figured that was none of her business either, unless Ming asked” (pages 23-24).

Chang Wong first sees Naomi Tiberias on the New Babylon palace airport tarmac. He greets her “shyly” (page 10). Naomi perceives Chang’s emotional dilemma: as much as he loathes New Babylon, it has been his home for years (page 62). Chang is “determined not to let anyone pair him off with somebody. Especially not Naomi. She had to still be a teenager, which was all right. He was just twenty himself. And while there was no question about her intellect and technical brilliance,” she is primarily his co-worker. Yet he finds her attractive, “stunning,” in fact (pages 116-117).

Naomi, an Orthodox Jew who has accepted Christ, will not enter a man’s quarters, Chang’s quarters, because it is inappropriate in her culture (page 119). However, she lets him walk her to her quarters (page 125). She also takes him around the city unescorted (page 119), lets him drink water from her cupped hands, drinks water from his cupped hands, lets him brush his fingers through her hair (page 120), caresses his shoulder (page 121), and eats with him (page 122), all of which are more intimate acts.

When Naomi says grace over their meal of real manna, tears well up in Chang’s eyes. “Her young voice was so pure and sweet and her words so perfect” (page 121). He is fascinated by her clothes. “It was more robe than dress, like something he imagined women wearing in Bible times” (page 123). He walks home “enamored, happy, safe.” That night, all his dreams are of Naomi (page 126).

Five months later, Chang says to his girlfriend what an incredible time it is to be alive. She admits that she would rather have known Jesus earlier and gone to be with him at the rapture. Now, she thinks that

“…the greatest time to be alive will be after the Glorious Appearing. Besides getting to be with Jesus in a time of peace on earth, I’ll get to live with you for a thousand years.”

Chang was staggered by the thought. He stopped and took both her hands in his. “I wonder what I’ll look like when I’m a thousand and twenty years old,” he said.

“You’ll still be cute to me. I’ll be an old Jewish lady with lots of kids between the ages of five hundred and nine hundred-and-something years old.”

He cupped her face in the moonlight. “I am so grateful to have found you” (pages 284-5).

As it happens, Tsion and both of the young couples end up in Petra together. A few days after the situation with Chloe is resolved, Tsion personally officiates at Ming and Ree’s small wedding (offscreen). Chang and Naomi “are counseled to delay their engagement until after the Glorious Appearing” (page 267).

As the battle of Armageddon approaches, Chang feels that he is taking the easy way by staying in Petra when others—including Tsion—are going into battle. Naomi insists that he has served his time. He is needed where he is; he taught her everything she knows. “I would have been nowhere without your teaching me … Call me selfish, but I’m glad you’re not venturing out. Father loves me, but not like you do … Remember, we want to survive so that we can be together for a millennium. Let’s not risk that for the sake of your conscience” (page 321).

Spoiler: Where, when, and how do the characters get saved?

Naomi and Chang go alone to the Urn Tomb in Petra. Naomi gives her testimony on pages 159-164.

Naomi had had a happy childhood. Her father “owned several eateries in the area around Teddy Kollek Stadium.” Eleazar “provided well” and was devoutly religious. The family never missed synagogue. They knew the Scriptures. They loved God. “I believe my father was proud of that, but not in a bad way—you know what I mean?”

Naomi was eleven when her mother (name unknown) developed cancer of the [unspecified intimate body part which Naomi is too shy to name]. Eleazar had the money to hire help, but he preferred to do it himself out of loving service to his wife. Naomi was inspired by his example. “He made her happy despite her pain.”

Nevertheless, it became clear that Mrs. Tiberias was dying just after Naomi’s twelfth birthday. Her husband was forced to put her in the hospital. The doctors told him there was no hope, but he refused to accept it. He and Naomi would pray for healing, and God would grant it. They prayed, but she continued to decline.

One night Eleazar came home late, angry and (to Naomi) frightening. Was Mother worse? “No, but she might as well be,” he had said. Naomi had never heard her father have cross words with her mother. They had argued because Mrs. Tiberias said, “Jesus is Messiah.” Eleazar blamed her “heresy” on the drugs the hospital prescribed. She insisted that her belief was true and not influenced by palliative drugs. He demanded to know who had spoken to her. He told her to stop talking nonsense. If she did not stop saying such things, he would stop bringing their daughter to the hospital. (“I made her weep. The woman I love with all my soul, who is dying before my eyes, I upset her.”)

That night, with her family at her side, Mrs. Tiberias died. Her last words were, “I go to be with God. Study the prophecies. Study the prophecies.” But Eleazar “forbade” his daughter to study the Bible, let alone the prophecies.

Eleazar blamed himself. He felt that if he had not upset his wife, if he had made the correct bargain with God, his wife would have been spared. He was distraught that he had denied a deathbed request, but he also could not comply. He became depressed and buried himself in work. He stopped attending synagogue or reading Scripture. Naomi felt that she also had lost her father.

When Naomi was thirteen, people disappeared. That scared Eleazar and Naomi into attending synagogue again. Naomi began studying prophecies. She suspected her father could see what she was seeing, but he refused to admit it. He finally decided to pursue it when Tsion Ben Judah announced on television that Jesus was the Messiah. The next day Eleazar acquired a New Testament.

Eleazar and Naomi became fascinated by Saul-turned-Paul. The first verses they memorized were his words from 1 Corinthians 15:1-4. Eventually they “just prayed and told God we believed it and wanted to receive it. It was weeks before we read enough and knew enough to understand what we had done and what it all meant.” (That is, it really did take weeks [pages 163-64] before Eleazar opened the back cover of his New Testament to notice the “road to salvation” verses Romans 3:23 and 6:23 and related verses, that are printed in the back cover of many palm-sized New Testaments.)

Chang is deeply moved by Naomi’s testimony. Every testimony is different, yet the believers come to the same place. For some people, the impetus was the disappearances. For Naomi, it was her mother. And Naomi can hardly wait to see her again.

Spoiler: Who is Krystall? What is Rayford’s connection to her?

Answer: Krystall is Carpathia’s current secretary. Rayford slips into her office and eavesdrops on her telephone conversation with her mother (pages 34-7). Krystall bears the mark of the beast. The darkness presses upon her. She cannot see. She cannot sleep. She is thirty-six years old, but she feels like seventy-five. The plague of pain gives her no peace or relief. She compares it to the worst cramps, the worst headaches, the worst arthritis, and to carrying a great weight that slowly crushes her.

Krystall fears and hates Carpathia. He no longer informs her of his plans. He expects her to accomplish the same amount of work despite her pain, and even though she can only see when he stands next to her. (Carpathia glows in the dark, but faintly.)

Krystall moans that “He is not the man I thought he was … Mean, cruel, vicious, egotistical, selfish. I swear, I’d need a thesaurus.” Her mother must have told her to leave her job, because Krystall adds, “Where would I go? What would I do? He knows what I know, and he wouldn’t be able to let me out of his control. No, now I just have to live with it … It can’t end well. I don’t care anymore. Death will be a relief … Well, I’m sorry, but I mean it … Now don’t, Mom. I’m not planning anything rash.” Rayford “wishes he could speak soothingly to her, to say something Jesus would say. But she was beyond help now. Rayford had never felt so hog-tied.”

Krystall’s Uncle Gregory is the only member of the family who never took the mark of the beast. Krystall wonders how much longer he can survive. “Just tell him I’m proud of him and to keep it up, but be careful.”

At this point, “a big, bony man of about fifty” walks into the office. He and Rayford can see each other. They can see the seal of God on each other. Rayford gestures for the man to give him five minutes, and the man leaves.

Krystall hangs up the phone to receive her visitor. When the other man leaves, Rayford speaks (pages 37-40). Krystall jumps. She fears she has betrayed Uncle Gregory. Rayford proves that he is not GC because he can see in the supernatural darkness. Krystall holds up her hands, and Rayford repeatedly tells her how many fingers she is showing him. Defeated, she “pressed her lips together and looked as if she was about to cry.” Rayford slips around behind her to prove his point, but he just scares her again.

Rayford claims that he can help her uncle. She should pass a message to him that he should log on to Tsion Ben Judah’s website. Krystall retorts that she does not need Rayford to spell the name for her. Apparently Krystall has been surfing the net at work. Therefore, she asks Rayford a question:

“What’s the deal with it being too late for people who already took Carpathia’s mark? We don’t still have our own free will?”

Rayford felt his throat tighten. “Apparently not,” he managed. “I don’t quite understand it myself, but you have to admit, you had plenty of reasons to choose the other way.”

“So the statute of limitations ran out on me when I made the big choice.”

“Well, then for sure. Maybe even before that. Who knows the mind of God?”

“I’m starting to, sir. This hurts. It hurts worse than the pain from the darkness. Just learned it too late, I guess, that you don’t mess with God.” (page 40)

Spoiler: Who is Otto Weser? What is Rayford’s connection to him?

Answer: Otto is the man who interrupted Krystall’s phone conversation. When Rayford tiptoes out to him, Otto hugs him. Otto hugs everyone (so fiercely that he nearly lifts Chang off the floor), but not Naomi because he feels he should have her father’s permission. Naomi hugs him, adding that, “My father is not here, but if the permission is mine to give, you have it.” Otto beams, “Ah, I love the young ones who appreciate the old movies,” and embraces her (page 48).

Otto is a German timberman, Judah-ite, and head of a small band of believers hiding in New Babylon (page 48). An exuberant and restless man, Otto tends to bounce on the balls of his feet when excited (pages 44, 235). He struggles to keep silent in the bugged corridors. In the safety of Chang’s apartment, he can hardly stop talking. Along the way, Otto plays a practical joke on a blinded Babylonian by sabotaging his watch. Otto chortles, “I think that was the last time he’ll have the time right” (pages 45-6). As they pass suffering people, Rayford whispers, “This breaks my heart.” Otto replies. “Not mine. But I’m working on it” (page 47).

Earlier that day, Rayford had slipped up behind Carpathia and mocked him in assorted voices for fun (page 32). Now, Rayford again sneaks up on Carpathia and his cabinet, with Otto in tow (pages 52-57). Since Carpathia cannot see his followers, he asks for an audible roll call. Otto mouths to Rayford that he is tempted to say his own name and see what havoc that might wreak.

Otto tells his story to Rayford, Smith, Chang, and Naomi (pages 49-50). Otto became fascinated by Revelation 18. (In that chapter, God calls his people out of Babylon.) Otto believed that there cannot be any people of God in New Babylon, so he and about forty other people resolved to go there. Besides, “playing hide-and-seek with the GC in Germany was getting old.” He states plainly, “We consider ourselves fulfillment of prophecy.” Otto laments that six of his people have since died, two of which he considers his personal fault. When the plague of darkness descended, he decided to leave their hiding place and see Carpathia’s offices, like a tourist with the museum to himself. None of Otto’s friends dared to come with him. Otto is understandably overjoyed to see another believer. None of his people can get them to Petra; maybe this new friend Rayford can transport them.

“Mac still was not sure what to make of Otto Weser. He was a good man, no doubt, but he was amateur in his thinking. He may have been a successful timber businessman in Germany, but Mac would not want to have served under him in combat” (page 325).

Rayford assigns Mac to evacuate Otto’s people. Only now does Otto absently remark (page 319) that he knows of other cells of believers who need Mac’s help. Fortunately, Mac has asked Lionel Whalum for a second air vehicle, a large jet, just in case. They should be able to evacuate up to 200 people (page 339).

Spoiler: How does Chloe get captured by the Global Community?

Answer: It is just past 3 A.M. San Diego time. Through the periscope, Chloe sees a GC truck pull up, then stop. After 15 minutes, Chloe decides to slip to the bay door and take a closer look. “It wasn’t as if those in the compound expected no traffic. But there wasn’t much else in the area, nothing worth stopping for at this time of night” (page 29). She pulls a hooded black sweat suit over her pajamas, a black ski mask over her face, and hiking boots on her feet. She tells herself she will not venture outside, but she takes an Uzi just in case. The walkie-talkie she leaves behind, so that an unintended transmission will not create noise. (Later, she realizes she could have simply turned it off.)

Step by step, Chloe rationalizes that she is only going to look out the door. Then, she is only going to sneak up to the truck and look in the window. Then she is only going to sneak around the corner, then just down the street. Her conscience frets at her that she is making a serious mistake (pages 41-2, 46), but the fresh air is so intoxicating (page 43)—and she finds men with Geiger counters and metal detectors walking a search grid (page 66). Chloe acknowledges to herself that her tactics are ill-conceived, but at the same time, Buck and George were wrong about the strangers being bored.

It happens that there are at least two trucks with almost twenty troops. Chloe decides to show herself and lead the enemy on a decoy chase (pages 66-70). She leads them a few blocks away before a 200-pound soldier tackles and cuffs her. Chloe’s face is bleeding. She wonders if they cracked her rib. She goes limp to buy more time. They cuff her feet to her hands, put her on her stomach in a truck, and drive away. Buck awakens to a sudden dread, but Chloe is already gone.

Spoiler: How does the GC identify Chloe?

Answer: Chloe gives a false name of “Phoebe Evangelista” and calls her child “Phoebe Evangelista, Jr.” (pages 68, 80). Her captors take her picture, but Chloe no longer resembles her old photographs. Her captors upload her fingerprints and eye scans to their Internet database. “If you’ve ever had a driver’s license, been to college, gotten married, anything, we’ll find a match” (page 72).

At 9 A.M. her captors call Chloe by name, stating that Stanford University recorded her iris scan when she enrolled in college (page 82). (Trivia alert: In Volume 2, Chloe the Stanford student has not heard of e-mail—Buck has to explain it, demonstrate it, and set up her account—but her university is now revealed to be so technologically sophisticated that it recorded the iris scan of all students as part of standardized record-keeping.)

Spoiler: What do the villains to do try to obtain information from Chloe?

Answer: “Jock,” a relocated Aussie, discusses the fate of the Williams child over breakfast (page 76). Normally he would rather enroll the child in the Junior GC (a sort of evil Scouts organization or church club) before the child begins school. But if it is the only way to obtain Chloe’s cooperation, Jock could list the child as a nonentity until the age of twelve (page 83). Chloe’s sentence can be commuted to life in prison. Jock promises to place her in a prison that would be relatively “livable.”

“‘And who would raise him?’ Chloe said, wincing, realizing hunger was an effective tactic after all” (page 83). She last ate at seven p.m. the previous evening (page 131), but already she is becoming “light-headed” as hunger gnaws (page 85).

Jock is pleased to learn Baby Williams’ gender, at least. Doesn’t Chloe want to live, to not leave her little boy orphaned? Chloe states that she is uninterested in life in prison. She will not take the mark (page 80).

Jock alternates his “negotiations” with a more leisurely approach. It is past Chloe’s breakfast time; the mere mention makes Chloe’s mouth water (page 79). Would she tell him her secrets for “an artery-clogging special: eggs, bacon, sausage, toast, pancakes with lotsa syrup” (page 84). No? Then would she mind if he eats? “As you can understand, ma’am, we don’t feed uncooperative prisoners.” She will receive periodic morsels of “some sort of nutrition bar” designed to keep her alive until they kill her (pages 79, 89).

Jock talks a little more trash about her family, then mentions Chloe’s undercover adventure in Greece. Chloe silently wonders if there is a mole in her group (page 81).

Spoiler: How is Chang’s situation resolved?

Answer: Chang is permitted to enter Petra because he bears the seal of God on his forehead. He also bears Carpathia’s mark of the beast on his forehead. (Trivia alert: in previous volumes, the teenaged Chang accepted Christ and received the seal of God. The seal is visible only to other believers. Others decreed that he was too young to make his own decisions, so he was held down and the beast’s mark applied to his head by force.)

Chang is treated like “royalty” in Petra, but he is ashamed to be seen. He acquires a baseball cap and never removes it, despite the disapproval of his elders who expect young men to demonstrate better manners (pages 118, 133). Chang implores his handlers Miss Naomi and Mr. Smith to bring him before Tsion Ben-Judah and Chaim Rosenzweig (page 117).

Tsion and Chaim receive Chang (pages 134-140). Chang begs Tsion to do something to remove the shameful beast-mark. Tsion decides that he, Eleazar, and Chaim will lay hands upon Chang and pray. Tsion asks only that Chang will accept God’s decision, even if the answer is No. Chang agrees, then bursts into tears. Tsion prays, incorporating Ephesians 2:8-9 and other Pauline verses. Chang experiences a physical response. Sweat drenches him. His limbs feel one hundred pounds heavier each. If the men were not holding him, he would fall down. But when they finish, Chang’s forehead bears only the seal of God.

Spoiler: What does Albie do?

Answer: Albie (“Al. B”) needs help to complete a mission with three objectives (page 88). One, he wants to know where “the largest ever cache” of nukes has been stored. Two, he wants to plant transmitting devices in Carpathia’s next meeting room or hiding place. Three, he cannot complete objective Two unless he learns where to find this meeting room or hiding place. (All Albie knows is the name of the city.)

As he prepares, Albie broods on his past (pages 77-79). Of the three top black marketers in the Middle East, Albie and Mainyu Mazda (“Double-M”) were two; Mainyu murdered the third. It is said that Mainyu has a tattoo for every person he has killed. (Supposedly the one representing his wife has “a feminine flair.”) Unfortunately Mainyu is the only person who might be able to help Albie complete the mission in so short a time.

Albie pays “Sahib,” Mainyu’s lackey brother-in-law, to watch his scooter while the big boys talk (pages 90-92). Albie is nonplussed that he has to compete with a deaf-mute tattoo artist for Mainyu’s attention. Who was MM’s last victim, Albie inquires. Mainyu corrects him: who will be the victim. “Sometimes I get them in advance.”

Spoiler: How does Albie die?

Answer: Mainyu comments that it is no secret that Albie has no love for Carpathia (page 98). He offers the services of the tattoo artist to give Albie a fake mark. Albie declines. Mainyu jokes that Albie is afraid that “the evil spirits” will get him. MM fears nothing. MM has a fake mark. He adds that if his mark were real, it would be the number 1, because he “looks out for number one” (himself). He claims that the Global Community allows him to operate with impunity, because his business includes bounty hunting (page 99). He is paid twenty thousand Nicks for every unmarked individual he produces, dead or alive. “I find the dead more manageable. No escape attempts.”

Albie offers MM thirty thousand Nicks, all the money he has. Mainyu says that his services are worth fifty thousand. Albie assumes they are haggling over the price, like old times. But MM calls in his brother-in-law and asks for a gun. “My old friend and I are twenty thousand Nicks apart, and he is the solution. What is the bounty on unmarked citizens again, Sahib?” It is, of course, twenty thousand. MM adds, “And we don’t even have to do the job” (pages 100-102). He shoots Albie in the head.

Spoiler: What do the villains do next, to try to obtain information from Chloe?

Answer: It is late in the afternoon during Chloe’s first day in prison. A custodian enters the cellblock. He expresses surprise, saying that he was not told they had anyone in custody. Chloe, “dying to be charming,” jokes with him about her bad luck in wandering into a cell block, accidentally locking herself in, and coincidentally attiring herself in clothes identical to prison garb (page 103).

The custodian hesitates. Did Chloe receive her One Phone Call as per American law and custom? No, she did not. The man admits that he thinks the unmarked rebels get what they deserve, but he still thinks that an American under arrest should get one phone call. He slips Chloe his phone, poor “pretty little thing like you. What’s the harm?” (page 104).

Spoiler: Does it work?

Answer: Not really. Chloe assumes the call will be traced (page 105). She blurts out a short speech so that her father cannot interrupt her. She says she is in the San Diego GC jail. She tells her family she loves them. (She makes another tactical error by calling baby Kenny by name [pages 106, 217].) Chloe asks Rayford three times if he remembers a vacation that the Steeles took in Colorado about twenty years ago. She asks that he think of it, so that whatever happens to her, they will be thinking the same thing.

Rayford and Mac ponder Chloe’s words. Mac prods Rayford to list their entire itinerary from that old vacation. Rayford mentions a country-music concert at Red Rocks. (He remembers because he had to carry Chloe—she was only five or six years old—and it was hard to breathe at that altitude.) Mac concludes that Chloe is warning them to evacuate the San Diego survivors to the red rock city of Petra (pages 126-28). Rayford summons more of Lionel Whalum’s fleet of air vehicles (page 142).

Meanwhile, Chloe shatters the cell phone. The custodian reappears and informs her that the call was traced to a moving target, probably a plane, off the East Coast. When it is forced to land to refuel, the villains think they can catch it (pages 109-110). However, since the resistance has its own landing strips and fuel—Rayford selects Jacksonville—the truth is that Chloe’s phone call has placed her father … somewhere on Earth.

To reward her, the custodian gives Chloe advice (tell Jock what he wants to know), offers to fetch Nigel with her energy bar (she declines), and turns on the cellblock’s television (much too loud, to annoy her).

Spoiler: How do the villains describe Chloe’s capture?

Answer: Chloe is the lead story on the 5 o’clock news. In Detroit, news anchor Anika Janssen interviews GC Chief Akbar over the phone (pages 111-13). Akbar claims that Chloe was apprehended without incident in a raid that had been meticulously planned by two task forces for months.

Spoiler: How do the villains describe their prisoner? What are the (false) charges?

Answer: Akbar claims that Chloe was expelled from Stanford six years ago, after threatening the lives of the faculty.

Janssen adds that Chloe is the daughter of Rayford Steele, who was fired from his job as Carpathia’s pilot for insubordination and drunkenness on the job. The resentful Rayford joined the conspiracy to assassinate Carpathia. Chloe’s husband, Cameron Williams, was “formerly a celebrated American journalist who also worked directly for the potentate before losing his job due to differences in management style.” (The anchor adds that his current writings have few readers.)

Allegedly the trio are “wanted for more than three dozen murders around the world. Mrs. Williams herself heads a black-market operation suspected of hijacking billions of Nicks’ worth of goods around the world and selling them for obscene profits to others who cannot legally buy and sell due to their refusal to pledge loyalty to the potentate.”

Finally, the anchor claims that “The Williamses, who have amassed a fortune on the black market, have one child remaining after Mrs. Williams apparently aborted two fetuses and an older daughter died under questionable circumstances.” A surviving child, a two-year-old son, is supposedly named Jesus Savior Williams, because he supposedly is the reincarnation of Jesus and the future physical and spiritual ruler of the world. (“Chloe sat staring at a toddler, clearly not Kenny Bruce, who had a Bible in his lap and wore a tiny T-shirt that read, ‘Kill Carpathia!’”)

The network switches to a local feed with reporter Sue West, who interviews Jock, called Colonel Jonathan Ashmore (pages 113-14). Jock is ill at ease on television—his uniform “may once have fit him but now encased him like a sausage” (page 74), and his grasp of geography is equally small—but his lies are bold. He portrays Chloe as a sniveling coward who pledged her little son over to the custody of the GC Juniors to avoid a death sentence. Jock then claims that Chloe betrayed someone else (see next spoiler).

Spoiler: How do the villains describe Albie’s death?

Answer: Jock claims that Chloe betrayed Albie to bargain her way out of prison (pages 113-114). Albie purportedly shot himself to avoid being captured. The broadcast shows a photo of Albie’s body. At the sight, Chloe screams, then sobs. She repeats that it is not true, someone tell her it is not true, please tell her. Nobody comes to her.

Spoiler: How have Chloe’s friends reacted to this past day of terrible news?

Answer: Buck awakens suddenly, sensing trouble. He cannot locate Chloe. He asks Ming Toy to baby-sit Kenny Bruce. Buck immediately calls George (page 58).

Buck frets that it is “just like [Chloe] to be out without a walkie-talkie or a phone, which he attributed to strategy rather than impetuousness. He would have a hard time convincing anyone else of that, though” (page 63). Rayford also keeps his doubts to himself. “Chloe had been Daddy’s girl from day one. She loved school, was inquisitive, single-minded, stubborn. She was the last person in the family to come to Christ, and Rayford had no illusions that he was responsible for that. He had taught her to believe only in what she could see and smell and touch. Chloe always wanted to be in the middle of the action, and if someone wouldn’t put her there, she’d put herself there. He wanted to resent her for it, especially now, but he was overwhelmed with worry and fear” (page 73).

News of Albie’s death travels. Chang cannot believe that Albie is dead. The only way Smith can convince him is to state plainly that Albie’s cell phone was answered by the man who is believed to have killed him (page 131). Mac, though, believes it at once.

George yells at Buck that, “if it was my wife out there,” George would not become paralyzed with “feeling sorry for himself” (page 64). Buck yells at George that it is hypocritical for George to propose abandoning Chloe (pages 82-3). George is safe, here, now, precisely because of the “selfless, heroic efforts of the Tribulation Force, Chloe in particular” during a recent raid in Greece. George argues that the cases are not parallel. He is a strong man who is trained to kill; he could not have been rescued if he had not taken out a captor in his own right. Even though he trained Chloe, George thinks the odds are simply too bad this time.

Abdullah Smith agrees. Storming a stronghold “is not like surprising a band of amateurs in the woods, as they did in Greece” (page 129).

George does think that it works to their favor that Chloe is more valuable to her captors alive (page 108). Smith disagrees. Not only will Chloe choose not to cooperate, she will “enjoy” saying so. The fear is that “this will shorten her potential benefit to the GC and thus shorten her life” (page 129). This only makes Buck more frantic. He has to be discouraged from launching a raid alone (pages 129, 141, 154). George gives him a five-page tongue-lashing, until Buck finally produces a good idea: the enemy will swarm at the location where they originally apprehended Chloe (page 158). They might talk amongst themselves, yielding clues in their gossip.

George assigns “Razor,” another military man, to observe the enemy at said location. The news is bad: Razor thinks they moved Chloe about six hours before Razor returns to base to inform them. Buck shrieks that this was their best chance to rescue Chloe, and Razor let them sleep through it (pages 178-9). No, in Razor’s opinion, the stronghold was too heavily fortified. Buck takes out his anger on the furniture. George and Rayford respond that Razor probably made the correct decision (page 180).

At Petra, the believers compose a written statement. They state that Chloe dropped out of Stanford after the rapture. When she was enrolled, she held a 3.4 GPA (out of a 4.0) and was active in student affairs. Her father and husband were not fired. They quit. Buck’s cyber-magazine is exceedingly popular, circulating to “the same audience that is ministered to daily by Dr. Tsion Ben-Judah, at last count still more than a billion.” The Steele-Williamses never murdered three dozen people. They admit to “one kill for Cameron Williams and two for Rayford Steele, both in self-defense.” Chloe has no fortune. She barters. She never had an abortion or lost a child, and has had but one pregnancy, resulting in her son, who is much older than the notorious televised toddler. Chloe’s child is not Jesus and no one they know ever said it or thought it. By the way, Nicolae Carpathia is the Antichrist, they add. Chloe is not bargaining with the GC. She is willing to die for Christ. She did not sell out Albie, and no evidence supports the GC’s claim that he did it to himself (pages 147-9).

Buck caroms around the compound, admitting that he is making a nuisance of himself (pages 183-5). He does not even help write the Internet statement. When he fails to produce a rescue plan either, he apologizes to Razor and asks how he got his name. The sheepish Razor mentions a collision involving a rookie snowmobiler, his head, and a “razor” (barbed wire) fence. (Now Buck cannot stop thinking about Chloe’s probable death by decapitation.)

“Rayford had only an inkling of what Buck must be going through. It had to be different for a husband than for a father. But he couldn’t put his finger on it” (page 211). Rayford’s private rescue plans are equally desperate and unworkable. When he suggests they wander the Midwest in a two-seater, Buck reminds him that even if they find Chloe, where on the plane would she sit (pages 211-12).

“Buck told Rayford of his tormenting daydreams. To his surprise, Rayford’s lip began to quiver.” Rayford also grieves. “A father has a different take, you know. Imagine how you feel about Kenny. I was there when Chloe was born. Seems like yesterday she was a little red ball of squealing girl who could be comforted only by being tightly wrapped in a blanket and put on her mother’s chest. Then, to us, she was the most beautiful creature we had ever seen. We would have done anything for her, anything to protect her. That’s never changed. She’s grown up to be a beautiful woman, and somehow, even with all her injuries and disfigurements, I still see her that way” (page 186).

Spoiler: What do the believers do to try to rescue Chloe, that has the best chance of working?

Answer: Rayford calls Krystall at her home late at night (pages 93-95). The operator refuses to transfer the call unless the caller identifies himself. Rayford identifies himself as Uncle Gregory. Rayford asks if Krystall has heard any gossip about “an important arrest” that could be Chloe. Yes, says Krystall. She has not heard anything privately that differs from what they all see on the news.

Rayford asks if there is anything he can do for Krystall. She says that she needs her eyes. Rayford sends Otto to be her eyes (pages 105-6). Krystall asks, what is in it for Rayford? Rayford asks Krystall to give Otto access to her communications, equipment, and files.

Zeke distrusts Krystall. She could have second thoughts and set an ambush for Otto and Mac. Mac replies that they do not know another way to learn the information she can provide (page 194). Zeke concedes that “we’re not going to try to stop prophesied events, but it’ll be good to know exactly what’s happening” (page 203).

Mac proposes Krystall could be included in the evacuation of New Babylon. (Rayford gives consent; page 226). Mac refuses to admit Krystall to Petra, though; it is for believers only. “Sad as it is, she made her decision, took her stand, and accepted the mark. Getting her out of New Babylon just keeps her from dying in that mess … She’s going to die anyway, sometime between then and the Glorious Appearing, and when she does, she’s not going to like what eternal life looks like. That doesn’t mean we can’t befriend her and be grateful for her help” (pages 203-4).

Otto gushes, “Miss Krystall has been a gem. I wish she was on our side.” Krystall let him listen in on a phone conversation involving Akbar. The believers now have the information for which Albie died: the exact date, place, and time of Carpathia’s meeting with his ten kings (pages 222-23).

The believers bid for and win a contract to wire Carpathia’s conference hall for sound (pages 268-70). They are checked for card-carrying ID but not the mark. (They wear gloves and hats.) The firm “Woo & Associates” finishes the (double) job ahead of schedule, “and to their credit, the GC electronically deposited full payment via the Internet. ‘We are now on Carpathia’s payroll,’ Chang told Rayford.”

Unfortunately, they still cannot locate Chloe. Buck suddenly wonders if the GC is feeding Krystall false information to test her loyalty (page 224). Rayford asks her to take the initiative: to phone someone who really would know, even though she lacks clearance to ask. She agrees, then … silence. Rayford and Buck wonder why she has not called them (pages 229-30). Buck implies that Krystall is needlessly tardy. (“You should have given her some kind of a time frame. Doesn’t she assume we’d like to know before the execution?”) Rayford replies that she has been a “godsend.” Buck snorts that this is an “interesting thing to say about someone bearing the mark of the beast.”

When Krystall’s efforts fail, Rayford rules that they will make no further attempts to save Chloe. “She’s in God’s hands now. If he chooses to spare her somehow, he’s apparently decided to do it without our help” (page 237).

Spoiler: How does Chloe get from San Diego to Joliet?

Answer: Chloe gets sedated. The night matron, a black woman named Florence (page 143), explains to Chloe what words like jail and prison mean. Shower once a week (if Chloe lives that long); one energy bar daily (250 calories) if Chloe asks nicely; maybe male guards who “want a date.” Chloe responds that if anyone enters her cell, “one of us wouldn’t come out of here alive” (page 144). After Chloe threatens four times to kill any captor (including Florence) or die trying, Florence groans why Chloe “can’t just give a little, girl?” If Chloe stops with “the sassing,” Florence will bring her the daily energy bar around midnight (page 145).

Florence turns off the obnoxious television … and turns on the lights and the obnoxious radio, tuned to a loop of “Hail Carpathia!” all night (page 146). Nevertheless, she brings the “tasteless” energy bar at midnight as promised (pages 164-65). It has been about 29 hours since Chloe last ate, at home. Chloe tries to save half of the snack for breakfast. What else does she have to look forward to? (“Maybe Jock would show up and eat his breakfast in front of her again” [page 172].) But Chloe eats the rest after another half hour. She slips into bad dreams about being headless and her family rejecting her.

Florence returns at about 4 a.m. to consume a hamburger and a soft drink in front of Chloe (pages 169-73). Florence tells Chloe she is a mother too, to three-year-old Brewster. Chloe wonders if she can reason with Florence, mother to mother. After some bickering, Florence sneaks Chloe a chocolate shake: “cold, thick, rich, and—if anything—too chocolaty.” (It has been 4 hours since Chloe ate the energy bar, and 33 hours since Chloe ate supper at home.) Chloe trusts Florence because the food has no terms or conditions and it was fine last time. Of course, the strong flavor covers the taste of the sedative. Chloe giggles, sobs, and says nonsense words. She drops the milkshake, then slides off her seat and plops into the spill on the floor. “Loved the bit about you having a kid,” says Jock. Florence replies dismissively, “Oh, honey, they easy when they hungry.”

As for transportation, Jock drives them to the airport in a hearse (page 181).

Spoiler: What happens to Chloe in Joliet?

Answer: The plane lands at about noon (page 189). Jock decides to “finally” feed the prisoner and “play good cop.” He claims that if Chloe has not been broken by now, she never will be … not without truth serum, anyway (page 190). Jock and Jess call her “a tough bird … I’d have been doing the ‘Hallelujah Chorus’ solo by now.” Jock brings “food,” the same full meal, whatever it is, that the rest of them are eating for lunch. Chloe prays that the food will not make her sick, for discipline to eat slowly, and that God will “override any poisons Jock might have put into it” (page 192). It has been 8 hours since Chloe drank half the chocolate milkshake; 12 hours since Chloe ate the energy bar; and 41 hours since Chloe ate supper at seven P.M. at home.

They enter Joliet’s Stateville prison. A reporter, seeing the brown stain on Chloe’s clothes, asks if she “soiled herself” (page 202). Chloe hollers “chocolate, chocolate” at them, until Jock knocks the wind out of her and tapes her mouth shut (page 201). (He is getting a promotion out of her capture, and if she corrects his facts, he will lose it.)

Jock tells the reporters that Chloe tried to trade “physical favors” for leniency, but they have standards to uphold (page 201). Jock shows her the seven guillotines, caked with dried blood. The blades are sharpened, but the machines are no longer cleaned. Sometimes sticky things stick in mid-action. Heads go in a Dumpster. The stench makes Chloe want to retch. Chloe is scheduled for the guillotine in the center, tomorrow, at ten A.M. If Chloe prefers other arrangements, it is time to tell Jock everything (page 197-200). She is imprisoned in darkness in solitary confinement.

Reporters, guards, and Krystall insist that Chloe is in Angola, Louisiana (page 204). Jock moved her so that she would never be rescued.

Spoiler: How does Krystall die?

Answer: Otto tells Mac that he went to Krystall’s office and found her dead on the floor with the phone buzzing (page 235-6). He checked her pulse. Otto adds that the air smelled bad. He thinks that someone suspected her of treachery. Even in the darkness, they found her. “Maybe they had someone who knew the palace come back and feel his way up there, make sure she was there by talking to her, and then toss poison gas or something in there.” Mac challenges that Rayford has been waiting for Krystall to call him. Otto apologizes. “I didn’t know what to do. I was so upset.”

Spoiler: What does Chloe sing in prison?

Answer: In San Diego (her first full night of captivity), she sings the warped anthem “Fail, Carpathia!” (lyrics on page 146) to drown out the noise of “Hail, Carpathia!” (lyrics on page 21). Her husband wrote the parody. (Aside: lyrics for both here).

In Joliet (her second full night of captivity) she sings “Trust and Obey” by Sammis and Towner, and “Standing on the Promises” by R. Kelso Carter (pages 208-9). At this point an unseen angel (called Caleb on page 238) manifests in the cell to strengthen her.

Later that night (page 212), Chloe is injected with truth serum. She sings “[There Shall Be] Showers of Blessings” by Whittle and McGranahan, and “Amazing Grace” by John Newton (pages 215, 219). Later still that night, when Chloe returns to solitary, Chloe “sang and prayed and quoted Scripture” but the specifics are not recorded (page 228).

(On a music-related note, Jock is puzzled that Chloe really believes all this “pie in the sky by-and-by” with harps and white robes stuff. Chloe replies, “I hope you’re right about the pie but not the harps” [page 220].)

Spoiler: Why does the “truth serum” fail to work?

Answer: Reader interpretations vary. It is true that Chloe prays for strength to resist questioning (pages 192, 201). Then she prays, “I need you to override the truth serum,” (pages 206-7). When Chloe is restrained and injected with truth serum, she sees Caleb seated in Jock’s chair (page 214). Chloe feels the chemically induced euphoria, yet she somehow “knows better” than to tell Jock any secrets. (Alternately, it has been suggested that Caleb makes Jock ask only questions to which Jock already knows the answer. A third possibility is that Caleb has diluted the drug, either by altering its formula or potency, or by causing Jock to misread the dosage.) Whatever the reason, Jock abandons the attempt after three pages. He says he has never seen anything like it (page 219).

Spoiler: How does Chloe Steele Williams die or escape?

Answer: In solitary, Chloe feels the presence of God (page 231). Hunger continues but troubles her less than before. She cannot get comfortable, and her muscles ache. When she finally drifts off to sleep, she is awakened by the sound of several helicopters. She wonders if her family has launched a raid in force (page 237). It would take a “miracle” to rescue her, but Chloe has seen miracles before.

The helicopters are merely carrying news crews. The GC assigns Chloe a cosmetics artist. It is important to the “pageantry” to prove that Chloe has been well treated. Chloe retorts, “Snatched from my family, starved, drugged, flown halfway across the country, injected with truth serum, and held in solitary confinement overnight is your idea of fair treatment?” The woman shrugs. “Hey, I’m just the makeup artist” (page 239). Over Chloe’s protests, the woman tidies Chloe’s hair and washes her face. Chloe submits to rouge but refuses the mascara and lipstick. She finds it absurd that the TV people go to such effort to ensure that she has the best-looking head in the Dumpster (pages 240-41).

“Early on in her spiritual walk, Chloe had entertained a smugness, particularly when people berated or derided her for her beliefs. She was too polite to gloat, but she couldn’t deny some private satisfaction in knowing that one day she would be proved right. But that attitude too had mercifully been taken from her. The more she learned and the more she knew and the more she saw examples of other believers with true compassion for the predicament of lost people, the more Chloe matured in her faith. That was manifest in a sorrow over people’s souls, a desperation that they see the truth and turn to Christ before it was too late” (pages 231-32).

This thought makes Chloe wonder if she still has a charge to keep. Could there be in prison any individuals who bear neither the seal of God nor the mark? There are. Jock points to ten unmarked persons on death row; Chloe would be the eleventh (page 244).

Chloe notices that many of the thirty-six prisoners are Jews, “identified with stenciled Stars of David or wearing self-made yarmulkes, some made of scraps of cloth, some of cardboard. The people were wasted, scarred, having been starved, beaten, sunburned … Carpathia wanted these to be tortured to within an inch of their lives but not allowed to die before their public beheadings” (page 243).

As the spectacle begins, a frightened unmarked prisoner asks if she is “Williams.” Chloe replies that, “If you know who I am, you know what I stand for.” Chloe tells the woman to put faith in Christ, admit that she is a sinner separated from God who cannot save herself. She should ask God to save her by the sinless blood of Christ, who died on the cross for her sins. “You will die, but you will be with God.” When the prisoner falls on her knees to pray, a guard charges her to tackle her. Chloe breaks line and tackles him first, knocking out some of his teeth. He slinks away. The woman is now saved. She has the seal of God on her forehead and sees the seal on Chloe’s face (pages 245-6).

(Unbeknownst to Chloe, Chang has tapped into the GC’s television feed, all the way from Petra. He stands ready to pull the plug, to take the channel off the air so that no one will see Chloe die. However, he does not want to interrupt the broadcast prematurely, because it could deny Chloe a chance to witness to the television audience [page 249].)

Jock executes a marked prisoner. (The machine sticks.) Jock summons an unmarked prisoner. Caleb manifests in the prison yard. He appears to be 15 to 16 feet tall. His raiment is so dazzling that it hurts the spectators’ eyes to look upon him (pages 247). For three pages he quotes Scripture at the assembly and television audience. Jock mocks Caleb for interrupting a TV show and “[making] it better! Is this great theater or what?”

Caleb’s appearance creates a delay for the ten unmarked prisoners to pray. Chloe rejoices to see that six receive the seal of the saved. “The other three looked miserable, and Chloe assumed they were among the hard-hearted who may have been desperate to change their minds but had waited too long” (page 253). They take the mark on the next page.

Jock, out of intimidation or desire to adhere to the TV schedule, starts executing prisoners by sevens, to fill all machines. Caleb glows brighter still, so their tormentors cannot see the believers actually die. But, when the believers are dead, Caleb vanishes. The lighting returns to normal, the executions continue on schedule. “Chloe had stood in the hot sun for more than an hour … weak from hunger, parched with thirst, and dizzy from standing, she fought to maintain her emotions.” (If it is now 11 A.M., it has been 23 hours since she ate lunch with Jock, 31 hours since the chocolate milkshake, 35 hours since the energy bar, and 64 hours since Chloe was eating supper at home with her family around her.) With Caleb invisible again, she has to stand on faith (page 255).

Jock, full of himself again, turns Chloe “gently” and puts an arm around her. She wants to spit on him, but this is her last chance to make a positive impression upon potential converts in the television audience. Jock repeats the lies about her, then tells Chloe she can say a few last words if she takes the mark. Chloe pulls the microphone from his grasp and still refuses the mark. Jock tries to take back the microphone. Caleb manifests again. Jock instantly becomes rigid, then falls like a tree. In spite of themselves, the audience laughs (pages 256-58).

Chloe quotes Paul and Jesus and paraphrases Nathan Hale. She gives “eternal thanks to my father, who led me to Christ.” She tells her husband and son that she loves them. In the resurrection, she will be waiting for them just inside the Eastern Gate. Then she walks unescorted to the guillotine (pages 258-60). “As she knelt and laid her head under the blade, Caleb’s glow blinded the eyes of the world. Chloe heard only the pull of the cord and the drop of the sharpened edge of death that led to life eternal.”

Spoiler: What is Carpathia doing in this volume?

Answer: Besides putting a bounty on unmarked people and sending Jews to concentration camps (pages 24-25), Carpathia gradually abandons his darkened capitol of New Babylon … and the doomed people in it.

Carpathia continues to pollute the airways with his obscene pronouncements and activities. Chang and Tsion create a television commercial that states, “Proclamations from your potentate are allowed only by the goodwill of Tsion Ben-Judah and your friends at Petra” (pages 286-7). The next time Carpathia belittles Chang’s electronic supremacy—it is Chang who can take him off the air at any time, not the other way around—the exasperated Chang says he is so going to air that commercial.

Carpathia gives a long-winded (pages 294-301) speech about himself. He calls himself eternal, everlasting through everlasting, a product of evolution just like his evolved rival and the rival’s favorite evolved being, who call each other “father” and “son” (pages 293-4). (Trivia alert: there is no mention of the Holy Spirit.)

Carpathia takes credit for misleading “the woman,” who “really wanted” to do what she did. The “first siblings” were “easy,” because one wanted what Carpathia wanted. “These creatures are not really products of the older angel’s creativity. Within a few generations, I have them so confused, so selfish, so full of themselves that the old man no longer wants to claim they were made in his image” (page 296).

Carpathia snorts that his rivals are weak because they favor the Jews. “My forces and I almost had them [i.e. the Jews] eradicated not so many generations ago, but father and son intervened, gave them back their own land, and foiled us again” (page 297). This time, Carpathia “will prevail.” Why? He claims he has two advantages. One, he says he knows the truth of his rivals’ origin. Two, his rivals put their intentions into writing. (Carpathia says, “I can read.”) Carpathia plans to attack Jerusalem. This will force his rival, the son, to come back and defend it. Carpathia will ambush and eliminate him. Then Carpathia can prepare for the next task, namely, eliminating the father. Carpathia insists that he will win through sheer numbers (pages 298-99).

Carpathia acquires three new associates. They lurk in the background, resembling “triple manikins” in black. Tsion questions whether they are cardboard cut-outs. Do they even blink (pages 291-92). They live, says Chang, who recorded their entrance. In Carpathia’s private meeting with the ten kings, Carpathia refers to the three bodies as “shells” (page 301). Carpathia and Leon Fortunato then calmly vomit forth three slimy froglike creatures (two from Carpathia and one from Fortunato). “The three now bore a striking resemblance to Carpathia. They sat back casually, smiling, nodding to the potentates all around. The leaders looked stunned and frightened at first, but soon warmed to the personable strangers” (page 302).

Carpathia asks his human associates to formally lay hands upon the creatures. Carpathia commissions them to go forth and gather all enemies of God, and to perform signs and wonders to recruit said enemies (pages 302-3). “Ashtaroth, Baal, and Cankerworm” then disappear in a huge bolt of lightning (Carpathia’s lightning, that is). Buck and Chaim call this incident the fulfillment of Rev. 16:13-14.

Spoiler: How is New Babylon destroyed?

Answer: Otto’s unnamed friend breathlessly reports that an angel manifested before them and quoted the Bible verses that told them it was time to flee (page 338). Mac lands at a palace landing strip, where 150 believers await them.

From page 340, in its entirety: “Mac and Lionel had their planes loaded and turned around and headed down the runways when two invading armies attacked. Before Mac was even out of New Babylon airspace, black smoke billowed into the heavens. He circled the area for an hour, and Lionel followed, as their charges watched the utter destruction of the once great city. Within sixty minutes every building was leveled, and Mac knew that every resident was slaughtered. When the mysterious armies who had invaded from the north and northwest pulled out, they left the entire metropolis aflame. By the time Mac turned toward Petra, the only thing left of New Babylon was ash and smoke.”

Spoiler: How does Tsion Ben Judah die?

Answer: Tsion preaches that after Babylon falls, Jerusalem will fall (pages 310-311). The Euphrates will dry up and enemies will cross on dry land. Even Carpathia believes this prophecy. He has placed measuring instruments in the water (page 316). One day the 1500+ mile river dries up “instantaneously” (page 323). The people who depended upon the river for their employment, water, electricity, and defense are left with nothing, but their reaction is offscreen.

Tsion states that Zechariah 13 proves that one-third of the Jews still alive will convert (page 309). But how can they convert if they get killed? Tsion decides to learn the art of war. “I want to be taught to fight, to use a weapon, to defend myself, to keep my comrades and my fellow Jews alive” (page 306). He would rather “die with my boots on” in battle, than watch that battle on television. He adds that if the Lord allows it, no man can stop it. Tsion has informed the elders. “Were they happy? No. Will they pray about it? Yes. Do I care what they come back with? Only if it is a yes” (page 307).

Mac McCullum “got a kick out of the whole thing. He was all for Tsion learning to be a soldier and coming with them to Jerusalem” (page 308). Tsion studies under Razor and George Sebastian. Tsion likes the machine gun best (page 314). How can anyone miss, he asks. He can spray it back and forth like a garden hose.

Rayford flies Tsion and Buck to Jerusalem (page 322) and drops them off at the Western Wall (still called the Wailing Wall in the novel). Orthodox Jews have come out of hiding to pray and slip papers into the cracks in the Wall (pages 326-7). Tsion and Buck stand before the “expectant” crowd and preach (pages 327-37). “Hundreds and soon thousands wept aloud and fell to their knees, repenting before God, acknowledging Jesus Christ as Messiah, pledging themselves to the King of kings” (page 336). Having witnessed to the point of exhaustion, Tsion and Buck spend the night with the Shivte family (pages 347-9).

In the morning, the battle begins. Tsion loses his escort Buck (page 359), whom Rayford assigned to protect him. To Buck’s horror, a zealous crowd carries Tsion on their shoulders … in the air … where the bullets are. Fortunately for Tsion, Buck drags him down in time. As they run toward the healing pool of Bethesda, Tsion jokes, “I was not hit, Cameron! No need for healing!” (page 365).

They experience a lull in the attack, which Tsion attributes to Zechariah 12:4. He preaches. Carpathia interrupts them with a loudspeaker. If the crowd will be silent for 15 seconds, Carpathia will take this gesture as a truce and enter their city in peace and forgiveness. Instantly, “thousands of weapons fired into the air, including Tsion’s and Buck’s” (page 372).

Carpathia’s battering rams compromise the walls of the Old City. Weapons fire follows. Tsion, shot, crumples to his knees, then to the ground. Buck drags him about an eighth of a mile, back toward the Bethesda pool and a small chamber where they shelter. Tsion is bleeding to death. He quotes 2 Timothy 4:6-7 because he is too is “being poured out as a drink offering” (pages 374-8). Tsion dies, with Buck at his side (page 378). Tsion missed Christ’s return by days, maybe a day, maybe hours.

Spoiler: (How) Does Cameron “Buck” Williams die? (How) Does Rayford Steele die?

Answer: Buck is nicked in the carotid artery by falling debris, after the enemy bombs Jerusalem’s Rockefeller Museum (page 391). He tries to stand up on his crumbling perch—keeping a hand tightly pressed on his neck—but the perch falls away too. His foot is hooked in the rubble. He finds himself hanging upside down, with blood pouring from his hip and neck.

Simultaneously, Rayford in Petra has wandered outside the perimeter of the divine forcefield or shield. (Alternately, it may be coming down as part of the divine timetable.) An enemy shell explodes directly in front of him (page 388). His all-terrain vehicle becomes airborne, rolls over him, then throws him clear as it disintegrates in its descent down the hillside. His phone plummets down the same path. Another shell falls, knocking Rayford’s head into a sharp rock. Blood spurts a good six feet from his temple (page 389). Both his knees are injured; one of his legs is down to bone where flesh-and-bone should be; he may have broken an ankle on one leg and a shinbone on the other. He hops, then crawls, all while trying to keep his hand pressed to his head wound. He is a mile from the nearest help. No one knows where he is (page 392).

In the last four paragraphs of the book, the text uses only terms like “he,” “him,” and “his.” One character asks himself what is the use of trying so hard to stay alive. “Come, Lord Jesus, he says. The other character has lost too much blood. He can see nothing though his eyes are open. He whispers, “Lord, please,” falls limp, and dies (pages 392-3).

(Bonus) Spoiler: Which man died, Rayford or Buck? Did the other man die, or did he live?

Answer: That is the cliff-hanger ending. The authors want the readers to be curious about the answer, that they might obtain and read Volume 12.

(If the Gentle Browser insists, Buck died. Rayford lived. Baby Kenny has lost both his parents, but his grandfather will live.)

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